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Eden Kwan (truth essay ) – The Organization of your essay was done very well, transitions between paragraphs were smooth. Also, I liked how you chose a general theme (relationships) to focus on was a good choice, as it narrows the scope of such a broad topic, allowing you to be able to dig deeperContinue reading “Peer comment (s2)”

Unit Reflection S2 Include the link to your blog here: https://writing523.poetry.blog/ Which of your pieces most helped you identify or explore and develop your God-given abilities? Discuss. The piece that help me identify my god given ability was probably my credo. it really help me realize that I have great potential in many aspects ofContinue reading “Unit Reflection S2”

Here are some of my essay and written work in semester 1: SAT writing What makes you come alive Credo Descriptive essay Book review Searching for bobby fischer essay ACT writing Others: Reflection Peer comment

Here are my semester 2 essay and written work: Kite runner mini essay 1-7 Kite Runner Mini essay 23 -end Kite runner Final Essay Research Paper Three Casket Essay

first draft The book title “kite runner” perfectly captures most aspects of the story and more importantly, the main conflict and resolutions. The main conflict of the story starts when Hassan goes kite running for Amir, which ends up causing Amir to witness Hassan’s brutal torment. For the rest of the book, Amir goes onContinue reading “Kite runner 23 to end”

Portia’s father wrote his will to portia and instructed portia on how her husband, who would also inherit all of the family’s money, should be chosen. He did so hoping that Portia would marry someone who loves her not only for her beauty and wealth but for her character. His plan was to offer suitorsContinue reading “Casket Mini essay”

 Zoos, aquatic parks and other animal enclosures have offered people the opportunity to  get a close encounter with live animals and appreciate the beauty of them. Furthermore, many animal enclosures and zoos have been crucial to reintroducing endangered species back to their native habitat. That being said, what often does not come across our radarContinue reading “Research paper – Tony”

Tony Tang  Mr. Robert Nollan College writing June 4th 2020 Life is a collection of experiences in reality. When we successfully lie to someone, we replace a part of their reality with the reality that we want to convey, taking away their opportunity to live life to his or her true potential. For example, ifContinue reading “Kite Runner final essay”

At the end of chapter 7 Rahim Khan tells Amir that there is a way for Amir to be good again.This is very significant to Amir’s character because, he has been overwhelmed with the guilt of not helping hassan when he got raped by assef, and needs to either be punished or do something forContinue reading “Kite runner mini essay”

Henry: descriptive essay I really enjoyed reading your essay, even though it did not have complicated words, you were still able to paint a clear scene with your description. I also really liked your casual writing style, as it makes your unique style and voice to it. Alden’s credo presentation: I really enjoyed reading yourContinue reading “Peer Comment”